Tuesday, January 10, 2012
What do you think about these types of characters???
I like your characters alot although, unless they are all very significant, it would be your best bet to take out one or two characters. your characters sound so developed that it might be very overwhelming to have all of them and it may become confusing for the reader. i like how you connected each personality to their creature without making it cliche or obvious. Your characterization is superb and they sound like round enough characters to build a story around just make sure they don't overwhelm the story. Good Luck!:)
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